The great escape and Love..??

"mom I want to go to the concert of the Jonas Brothers!" I begged my mom. She turns her head away "no You can't" she said. I rushed upstairs and slammed with the door. Why can't I go to the Jonas Brothers? Why?? Hopeless and sad I got to the laptop and turned it on and look at a website where I can buy tickets for the concert. My eyes were sealed on the "buy" button. Hmm why not? It's just once in a lifetime I guess. My heart beats fast when I clicked on the button.
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I clicked on yes and I bought my ticket! OMG I'm so excited. Days and days went away until I get my ticket. "Maria here's a letter for you"my mom said and gives me a letter. Immediatley I went upstairs and lay down on my bed. "here it comes" I whisper to myself. Carefully I opend it and my eyes are flying over the words. Then I touched the letter and found my ticket. I want to scream but I can't. Now I have to make shure I can come to theyr concert. But how?. A smile came on my face and looked at the window. My great escape.. The day before the concert I went to the city to buy clothes for the concert. Suddenly someone collide to me and I felt on the ground. Everyone was looking at me and that guy who layed also on the ground. Quikly he stands up and run away. Angry I stand up too and run after him. "Hey!" I yell to him "MAYBE A APOLOGY?"I screamed. He stops runnig and turned around and toke of his glasses. It was..Joe Jonas?. Immediatley I turned around and run away. I screamed to Joe JOnas OMG how imberrased. "Hey wait a sec!"he said to me and runs after me. He tooks my arm and turned me around. "aren't you Maria from High School?"he asked. I think deeply. "wait.. you..were on the same school as me?"I asked a little bit confused. He started laughing and nodds his head "Yeah I ehm.. I had a crush on you" he said and turns his head away and I saw that he turns out red. I looked at him "hey now I think I remember it.. a friend of mine went to me and said that someone had a crush on me and give me flower and I had to wait in the park but no one showed up" I said. He looks at the ground "I was so scared that you will dump me or something like that"he said. Almost whispered. I lift my hands and layed it on his cheeks. It felt strange to touch your Idol but also maybe your lover. Now it's my chance to make he loves me. His eyes were sealed with mines. "I still have a crush on you but I never find you"he told me. A smile came up on my face "now you found me..on a weird way"I tell him. He looks at the ground and laugh "yeah". He lift his face and look me in the eyes. "I still love you"he whispered to me. I started to blush. He smiled en his face came closer to mine and his lips touched my lips very softly. It felt strange and I loved it. "so I found you for ever?"he asked. First I didn't get it but now I understand it and said "yes you deffinetly found me". "but what do I have to do with my ticket?"I asked him. He grabs my tickets out of my hands and ripped it. "who cares about the ticket if you can join me on my tour?"he grins to me.

snappen jullie het een beetje? korte vertaling
Op de mddelbare schol vnod Joe Maria dus leuk en had met har afgesproken maar hij kwam niet opdagen. Nu paar jaar later heeft hij haar weer gevonden en ze worden verliefd en ze wou eerst stiekem naar het concert. Maar dat hoeft niet meer want ze gaat gewoon stiekem met hem mee op tour. Voor de domme onder ons : Ze loopt weg van huis om met har grote liefde te zijn
Do you get it now? Or should I explain i again?

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