My Beating Heart - Gedichten promoten

Voor Nikki (heart2)

My version (with grammar errors (bloos))

My heart is getting warm again
So much love, so much peace
You bring me be back to live
Slowly it starts beating again

Filling me with so much love
So warm, so peacefull, something I missed
You give me unlimited love
And I want that this last forever

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

I can't describe how I feel
I can't show you how much I love you
But I know, you will understand it anyway
And else I will show it you once again

My heart is beating once again
Not because it has to,
But because I want it to beat
You gave me back something I lost

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

Love broke me down and hurt me deep,
But you use it to rebuild me
Just a soft touch is enough to make me smile
With every word, you build my world

Version without grammar errors:

My heart is getting warm again
So much love, so much peace
You bring me be back to life
Slowly it starts beating again

Filling me with so much love
So warm, so peacefull, something I missed
You give me unlimited love
And I want this to last forever

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
Just because you give me a hug

I can't describe how I feel
I can't show you how much I love you
But I know, you will understand it anyway
And if not, I will show it you once again

My heart is beating once again
Not because it has to,
But because I want it to beat
You gave me back something I lost

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
Just because you give me a hug

Love broke me down and hurt me deep,
But you used it to rebuild me
Just a soft touch is enough to make me smile
With every word, you build my world

[ bericht aangepast op 8 aug 2011 - 17:48 ]

I hope you drown in all the cum you fucking swallow, to get yourself to the top.

Mitchell, je maakt me elke keer verlegen! Hou eens op.
Wel echt supermegalief.

Your make-up is terrible

Assassin schreef:
Mitchell, je maakt me elke keer verlegen! Hou eens op.
Wel echt supermegalief.

I hope you drown in all the cum you fucking swallow, to get yourself to the top.

Apart gedicht.

Bananen zijn lekker, toch? Zet dit ook in je signature als je ook van bananaaaas houdt!

Wat lief.

None but ourselves can free our minds.

/suicide.

Mitchell, you're a nice guy. But I have to do this.


My heart is getting warm again
So much love, so much peace
You bring me be back to live life
Slowly it starts beating again

Filling me with so much love
So warm, so peacefull, something I missed
You give me unlimited love
And I want that this to last forever

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

I can't describe how I feel
I can't show you how much I love you
But I know, you will understand it anyway
And else And if not, I will show it you once again

My heart is beating once again
Not because it has to,
But because I want it to beat
You gave me back something I lost

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

Love broke me down and hurt me deep,
But you used it to rebuild me
Just a soft touch is enough to make me smile
With every word, you build my world


I'm sorry, English grammar mistakes piss me off :'D
Apart from that, it's a very sweet poem ^^

Welcome to Night Vale. All Hail the Glow Cloud. All Hail Perfect, Beautiful Carlos.

My heart is getting warm again
So much love, so much peace
You bring me be back to live life
Slowly it starts to beat again

Filling me with so much love
So warm, so peacefull, something I missed
You give me unlimited love
And I want that this to last forever

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
just because you give me a hug (gave klinkt beter ipv give)

I can't describe how I feel
I can't show you how much I love you
But I know, you will understand it anyway
And else And if not, I will show it you once again

My heart is beating once again
Not because it has to,
But because I want it to beat
You gave me back something I lost

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

Love broke me down and hurt me deep,
But you used it to rebuild me
Just a soft touch is enough to make me smile
With every word, you build my world


I'm sorry, English grammar mistakes piss me off :'D
Apart from that, it's a very sweet poem ^^

Nog ieetsje aangepast en nu klopt het volgens mij.

[ bericht aangepast op 8 aug 2011 - 17:40 ]

Escritura schreef:
Mitchell, you're a nice guy. But I have to do this.


My heart is getting warm again
So much love, so much peace
You bring me be back to live life
Slowly it starts beating again

Filling me with so much love
So warm, so peacefull, something I missed
You give me unlimited love
And I want that this to last forever

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

I can't describe how I feel
I can't show you how much I love you
But I know, you will understand it anyway
And else And if not, I will show it you once again

My heart is beating once again
Not because it has to,
But because I want it to beat
You gave me back something I lost

I'm feeling so great
I'm free, for once, without fear
I'm free without obligations
And that just because you give me a hug

Love broke me down and hurt me deep,
But you used it to rebuild me
Just a soft touch is enough to make me smile
With every word, you build my world


I'm sorry, English grammar mistakes piss me off :'D
Apart from that, it's a very sweet poem ^^

quidquid excusatio prandium pro

Lizz bedankt voor je verbetering.
Antichrist: Alsnog bedankt

Ik zuig echt hard op grammatica :W

[ bericht aangepast op 8 aug 2011 - 17:54 ]

I hope you drown in all the cum you fucking swallow, to get yourself to the top.

Alwin, GTFO.

Mitchell, Geen dank :'D

Welcome to Night Vale. All Hail the Glow Cloud. All Hail Perfect, Beautiful Carlos.

MoonWarrior schreef:
Lizz bedankt voor je verbetering.
Dat andere wijf: Donder op (bloos)

Ik zuig echt hard op grammatica :W

[ bericht aangepast op 8 aug 2011 - 17:49 ]

We're all mad here.

MoonWarrior schreef:
Lizz bedankt voor je verbetering.
Dat andere wijf: Donder op (bloos)

Ik zuig echt hard op grammatica :W[/quote']

Je kan Ellen ook gerust bedanken ze verbetert het voor jou hoef je niet meteen donder op te zeggen.

Stuur dit gedicht gewoon naar haar in plaats van een topic aan te maken ik heb geen zin om mee te genieten van jullie "liefde"

Mvg Charissa

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(Be)lieve in (you)rself

MoonWarrior schreef:
Lizz bedankt voor je verbetering.
Dat andere wijf: Donder op (bloos)

Ik zuig echt hard op grammatica :W

Nou laat mij gewoon lekker, altijd die negatieve reacties van jou.
Die hangen me echt uit mijn keel en dan mag ik 1 KEER toch ook eens wat zeggen.
En als het je niet bevalt, rechtsboven is een kruisje en linksboven het terug knopje. Gebruik die eens (bloos)

[ bericht aangepast op 8 aug 2011 - 17:53 ]

I hope you drown in all the cum you fucking swallow, to get yourself to the top.

God iedereen is lief vandaag

Welcome to Night Vale. All Hail the Glow Cloud. All Hail Perfect, Beautiful Carlos.