Wie kan deze tekst goed voor me vertalen! - Story problemen

oké de engelse zinnen vertalers zijn echt HOPELOOS en zelf ben ik ook hopeloos in engels.

ik wil graag deze tekst vertalen in het engels:

Jij bent mijn zielsverwant en mijn vriend.
jij bent als een broer voor me en ik als een zus
je zou me tegen de hele wereld willen beschermen
maar tegen een gebroken hart kan ik jou niet beschermen
ik laat je niet vallen en zeg geen vaarwel je bent mijn vriend voor altijd.

ja.. ik ben ook niet geweldig in dichten:Y)

de engelse zinnenvertaler heeft het zo vertaald.

You are my soul mate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I like a sister
You'd be against the whole world to protect
but for a broken heart I can not protect you
I will not let you fall and do not say goodbye You're my friend forever.

alleen ik heb dus het idee dat deze engelse teks niet klopt!
dus wie kan deze tekst op de JUISTE manier naar het engels voor me vertalen?? het is namelijk voor mijn story(A)

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sommige liefdes zijn perfect, andere zijn vervloekt

You're my soulmate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I'm like a sister.
You'd protect me against the whole world,
but I can't protect you against a brokenheart.
I won't let you down and I won't say goodbye,
because you're my friend forever.

Ik ben niet supergoed in Engels, maar ik heb het eens geprobeerd. (:

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If we had not a soul, music would have created it.

You are my soulmate and my friend.
You're like brother to me, and I'm like a sister.
You would protect me to the whole world.
but I can't protect you to a broken heart.
I will be there for you and don't say goodbye because you're my friends for ever.

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Travel far enough, you'll meet yourself

You're my soulmate and my friend.
You're like a brother and i feel like a sister to you.
You would protect me against the entire world,
but i can't protect you against a broken heart.
I won't let you fall, and i won't say goodbye. You'll be my friend forever.

Ik weet niet of hij helemaal klopt, maar dit is hoe ik het zou vertalen.

[ bericht aangepast op 29 aug 2011 - 19:16 ]

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Chaos, panic and disorder. I see my work is done here.

You're my soul mate and my friend
You're like a brother to me, and I'm like a sister
You'd protect me against the whole world
But against a broken heart I can't protect you
I won't drop you, and I won't say fare well, you're my friend forever

Ik heb mijn best gedaan, er kunnen wel foutjes in zitten

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"Il fine giustifica i mezzi" ~ Niccolò Machiavelli

You are my soulmate, and you are also my friend.
You are like a brother to me, and I feel like a sister to you.
You would protect me against the world.
But against a broken heart, I cannot protect you.
I will not let you down, and I will not say farewell.
You will always be my friend.



Edit: Dit klopt. Ik ben hardcore-Engelsman.

[ bericht aangepast op 29 aug 2011 - 19:05 ]

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oké dankje
ik heb mijn vertalingen nu wel

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sommige liefdes zijn perfect, andere zijn vervloekt

Padalecki schreef:
You're my soulmate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I'm like a sister.
You'd protect me against the whole world,
but I can't protect you against a brokenheart.
I won't let you down and I won't say goodbye,
because you're my friend forever.

Ik ben niet supergoed in Engels, maar ik heb het eens geprobeerd. (:

Volgens mij zoals dit

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Stop being afraid of what could go wrong and start being positive about what could go right

You're my soul mate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I like a sister
You'd be against the whole world to protect
but for a broken heart I can't protect you
I will not let you fall and don't say goodbye You're my friend forever.

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Shoganai i ne~

You're my soulmate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I like a sister.
You would protect me for the whole world.
But for a broken heart I can't protect you.
I won't let you down and will not say goodbye,
You're my friend forever.

[ bericht aangepast op 6 sep 2011 - 17:43 ]

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Gnene, Hacked.

Padalecki schreef:
You're my soulmate and my friend.
You're like a brother to me and I'm like a sister to you.
You'd protect me against the whole world,
but I can't protect you against a brokenheart.
I won't let you down and I won't say goodbye,
because you're my friend forever.

Ik ben niet supergoed in Engels, maar ik heb het eens geprobeerd. (:

This, met het dikgedrukte als mijn eigen toevoeging. (:

[ bericht aangepast op 6 sep 2011 - 17:49 ]

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This is the part of me, that you're never ever gonna take away from me.