• Ik schrijf wel eens in Engels al weet ik niet hoe groot het publiek hier voor is op Quizlet. Ik vond dit idee ergens op mijn computer en heb het iets veder uitgewerkt ik ga het waarschijnlijk wel gewoon uitschrijven. Maar ik weet niet of iemand het zou willen lezen als dit geval is wil het misschien online zetten anders heeft dit niet heel veel zin.

    Ik heb het nog niet helemaal gecheckt op grammaticale- en spelfouten (al zitten er hopelijk niet echt veel in ^^) het is nog best een grove versie.

    Prologue

    The wild river had rushed through the landscape for thousands of years. Curved out a pad for itself to flood through. In return the mighty water had turned the ground around it into a perfect place for farming. So it was no surprise that after the first people came to live there the little village in a couple of centuries turned out to become one of the biggest cities for the time being, this planet had ever know. A city that was home to hundred thousands of people. Existing out of what seemed to a little child a million of small streets, around every corner new surprises. New puzzles to solve, a lot of new adventures to live for. Adventures who really just where sneaking in a tavern or stealing apples from the always busy market. In a time period mankind still fought with swords and human rights where far to be found. In a world of hidden magic and non-human creatures who were not really welcome inside city walls. But even the river high up in the mountains started as a little stream dodging rocks, rocks that the river would swallow easy a couple of hundred miles to the south. And everyone that knows of that place agrees that it is the real core of the river, the beginning is most times the deepest core. Also the city has a core existing out of untold stories. Some there yet to be taking place, some forgotten, most of them not worth telling. But some are, more than you might think of. There are stories involving the most darkest secrets, stories that are just about happy summers, stories about the creation of the city. But the best are ones nobody really knows about, the once full of surprises and discovery. This just one of the many stories collected in the core of the city. Not necessarily the best, but it’s the story that I want to hear. The words that I want to know about. And everything started with a few footprints in the mud. Left after that rain had kept a lot of people from going outside.


    Summary
    The fifteen summers old Bayr has dreamed his whole short life of adventure. Not a very original dream because almost everyone he knows shares the same dream. But chances to ever leave Nanysl are really small, because the city does not easily let her grip of you. He also never really thought about leaving until his father gets killed in a fight with a customer in his inn. And the whole future that was planned out for him is ruined. The inn has to be sold because his mother can’t run it on her on and Bayr is too young and irresponsible to take it over. He finally decides to seek his fate somewhere else leaving everything he knows behind. But when war breaks out and he is forced to fight for his life the outside world and adventure doesn’t seem so nice anymore.


    ''Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up.''

    klinkt misschien heel dom dat ik reageer maar
    ik ben heel erg slecht in Engels
    dus ik lees zelf geen story die volledig Engels is
    dus misschien is het een idee om in het vervolg een half nederlands en half engels of volledig nederlands verhaal te schrijven.
    al moet ik toegeven dat een story in het engels veel mooier klink
    al snap ik er helemaal niks van

    GEWELDIG!!! Ik zou het graag lezen, ik lees graag engels


    { do you call yourself a freaking hurricane like me? }

    Mij lijkt het wel leuk, al ben ik vooral benieuwd naar hoe je het gaat uitwerken.


    "Pride relates more to our opinion of ourselves, vanity to what we would have others think of us." - Jane Austen

    Ik vind het persoonlijk heel leuk om verhalen in het Engels te lezen omdat ik het een mooie taal vind, dus mij lijkt het alvast een goed idee. (:

    Heel erg bedankt allemaal voor de positieve reacties ^^


    ''Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up.''